Writing Novels

Lesson 3: Characters

Delineating Characters

Similarities among characters are ok unless those shared traits make it difficult for readers to keep each character separate in their minds. Give your characters distinctive traits that set them apart. For example, if both your main character and a secondary character have long, brown hair, consider changing one's hair color. If two characters share similar histories, determine whether this similarity supports the story or confuses readers.

How do each of your characters regard themselves? Though they may seem similar on the surface, they are probably much different on the inside. Emphasize these differences by showing ways each character interprets their own thoughts and feelings.

Will your readers be able to tell who is speaking by the way that individual characters talk? They should be able to, but avoid the use of accents or dialects in your dialogue. It's easier for the reader to imagine an accent if you tell them that the character has one rather than if you try to sound one out in your writing. If your dialogue doesn't sound natural, take time to listen to people speak. Don't forget to include the physical gestures, both universal and unique, that go along with speech.

You should have only one main character (or in some cases, one main group). All other characters support or influence this character in some way. Being aware of each character's level of importance in the story will help you determine who deserves the most focus which will further differentiate your characters.

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