Passive Voice and Passive Writing: Clarified also

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Thought you did an excellent job explicating the differences between active and passive.

The clarification is very helpful: Ouch!" exclaimed Tom, as meandering down the shadowy alley he tripped over a trash can full of publishers' rejection slips, and flat on his back in the accursed slips, watched helplessly as a mangy, black cat (belonging to a local book editor) crossed and re-crossed his projected path. . .

Thanks,
Tom

-- posted by Sunbear