Food, Cheap and Fast

» Jennifer Hollowell - Hello and welcome!

Hello and welcome!

I agree with what you say here and thank you for contributing it to the Suite. One suggestion, though:

You might want to consider breaking your article apart into paragraphs. It would make it easier for the reader.

Aside from that, I really enjoyed your content! Thank you!

Take care,

-- posted by Jennifer Hollowell

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» edaisy - Re: Hello and welcome!

In response to message posted by Poemwriter1:

Jennifer,
Hi! I'm gald you liked the article. Interestingly, it did indeed have separate paragraphs when I submitted it - I'm not sure what happened. I hope to figure it out before I submit my next one, though. Also, I noticed that you are a freelance writer. I am also - I have just started my own commercial freelance business called WriteBrain Solutions. (the website's under construction). Perhaps we can swap ideas sometime...
Thanks!
- Erica

-- posted by edaisy

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» Renie_Burghardt - Food Cheap and Fast

Hi Erica, welcome to the Suite! Your first article is excellent and thought provoking. Recently, I heard something aboy soy foods, and how they affect the brains of unborn children. The bad news goes on and on. What is there to do? I look forward to your other article. Good to have you here!

Renie

-- posted by Renie_Burghardt

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