We hook the reader by using action verbs and developing an immediate conflict. (William Noble) See my 2-22-00 article entitled: Adjectives and Adverbs are NOT Good Description
... we need an opening that forms a building block under the subsequent story. The block must contain: -- an event that will prove pivotal later, -- one or more characters who will figure prominently later on -- a writing style that will set the tone for all that follows (William Noble)
I hope some of this helps. I constantly scour writing books and articles for things that I will remember that may improve my writing. I volley back and forth from thinking about these things to seeing how my own writing relates to them.
As usual, thanks for listening!
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