19. EDITING DIALOGUE, Part 1

Paul smiled at Jenny. “I’m so glad you could come.” (ACTION SHOWS SPEAKER)

“So am I.” (NOTHING NEEDED, SPEAKER OBVIOUS)

“Can I take your coat?” (NOTHING NEEDED, SPEAKER OBVIOUS)

She slipped it off and handed it to him, then wandered across to the window. “There’s a lovely view from here.” (ACTION SHOWS SPEAKER)

“I like it. Would you like a cup of coffee?” (NOTHING NEEDED, SPEAKER OBVIOUS)

“Not just now.” After a slight hesitation, she asked, “Why did you invite me today? I know there’s some reason for it.” (SPEECH TAG NEEDED HERE)

I’ll continue this topic of editing and polishing dialogue in my next article. In the meantime, if you want to see some examples of my own dialogue skills, please visit my web site at http://www.annajacobs.com and click on one of the first chapters on the right hand side.

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