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Profile of a Serial Comma


© Barb Alexander

A serial comma (also called the Oxford comma)is the comma right before the conjunction that leads to the last item in a series:

The colors of the U.S.A. are red, white, and blue.
(The serial comma is between "white" and "and.")

Would you like ketchup, mustard, or both on your hamburger?
(The serial comma is between "mustard" and "or.")

Use of the serial comma is a matter of style. The Chicago Manual of Style supports it; the AP stylebook advises against it.

I, for one, believe that the serial comma saves a lot of confusion. Take, for example, the sentence:

The cars raced down the track in this order: blue and gold, black and white, red and yellow and green.

How many cars are there? What are their colors?

Three cars
Blue and gold
Black and white
Red and yellow and green

Or is it...

Four cars
Blue and gold
Black and white
Red
Yellow and green

Enter: the serial comma!

The cars raced down the track in this order: blue and gold, black and white, red and yellow, and green.

Now I get it! There are clearly four cars:

Blue and gold
Black and white
Red and yellow
Green

Consider, too, this example:

The menu will feature Caesar salad, hot dogs, macaroni and cheese and cookies and coffee.

Whoa! Someone found a way to include some of my favorite things all in one dish: macaroni, cheese, cookies, and coffee! But I'm not sure I'll want to taste this concoction, as I imagine the coffee will make the cookies soggy and everything else quite bitter.

Serial comma to the rescue!

The menu will feature Caesar salad, hot dogs, macaroni and cheese, and cookies and coffee.

Although it's not a stated rule of grammar, use of the serial comma is advised by Yours Truly-it will make your writing much more crisp, clean, and easily understood.

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3.   Jun 4, 2001 10:35 AM
I was taught English grammar at a Grammar School (fee paying). I was taught that the conjunction replaces the comma between the last 2 items of a list. I think the examples given are contrived and sho ...

-- posted by BarryAtwood


2.   Jun 3, 2001 10:13 AM
to use comma's properly, and I am just as bad as anyone, thanks for that timely reminder. I can see I will be a regular visitor to your articles.

Lynda ...


-- posted by Lynda04


1.   Jun 2, 2001 10:36 AM
Wonderful! Some comma wisdom! :) I'm on your side, Barb - my vote goes to the use of the serial comma! Did I read somewhere (was it even on this site?)that U.K. English doesn't demand the use of the ...

-- posted by A1_Viking





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